Is she the one, Susanna?
I do not know, Tomás
You must know, Susanna.
Why, Tomás?
She makes me think of you.
She is not me.
I want you back, Susanna.
I’m dead, Tomás.
You died too soon.
Yes.
Why? Why? Tell me.
It was my time to die.
It isn’t fair.
Life is not always fair.
Sasi makes me feel the way you did.
Then you must be with her.
What if I forget you?
You must forget me to be happy with Sasi.
I lost half of my heart when you died.
Then Sasi must replace that part of your heart.
No, Susanna. I can’t.
Yes, Tomás. You must.
I don’t want to forget you. You have the piece of my heart that makes me whole.
You must let me go, Tomás, so you can find love and happiness again.
No.
If Sasi is the one, she will hold the piece of your heart that makes you whole.
Truly?
Truly. Love makes the heart whole, not the person, Tomás.
Yes.
Do you love Sasi?
I’m falling in love with her, Susanna.
You must be fair to her, Tomás, and let her love you.
Yes.
You must forget me to love her, Tomás, or you won’t be happy.
Then I won’t be happy, Susanna.
Tomás.
I love you, Susanna.
I love you, Tomás.
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OK, Will, you made me cry. May I reblog this one?
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You may! Thank you, Sarah
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So emotional, so heartfelt. Just beautiful. ❤️💕
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Thank you, Miriam. I’m happy you commented 🙂 ❤
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Love never ending, you have written the story beautifully Will!
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Thank you, Mr. Mel!
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Wow! Just beautiful, Will. I’m glad to have followed Sarah’s link here. So moving.
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“Oh! Susanna, do not cry for me” (Stephen Foster) — but your poem almost made me cry for her. Well done.
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Thank you! I nearly used “Oh, Susanna” in some of the poems but didn’t want the song to come to mind. I have hummed it out of habit though! 🙂
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Oh, no. I can’t unhear/unassociate it now.
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