“Two dead women, a death in Vietnam, and an infant hastily given up for adoption stand between Aida and marriage to Tom, the man of her dreams.”
This is the pitch I’m using in the pitch event over at SavvyAuthors blog.
The Pitch Event runs through midnight 17 September. You may pitch to both agents and publishers.
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No comma after “adoption.” Otherwise, great!
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Nice catch! Thank you, Sarah 🙂
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Old editors never die. ..
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