Soft curl of a sweeping wave
breaking on a sandy beach;
crystal clear dew drops
dangling from a leaf; wind-
whispers leaning on pond grass
with feather-tips softly
sighing for the dragonflies
hovering near; random dreams
while dozing in the warmth
of a sunny day in May; rose
petals’ intimate, layering
spirals; the delicate filigree
of your ear; soft caress
in the touch of your breast;
sigh of exhale from your nose
on my neck; taste of lovesweat dotting
your lips; cries from your
throat as we come together.
Writers Envy 
This was magical to read. I could see and feel these lines;
“wind-whispers leaning on pond grass
with feather-tips softly
sighing for the dragonflies
hovering near”
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I’m glad to know that. That’s what I hoped people would take away 😊
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smiling!!
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I see you rearranged the ending lines, which really changes things up in regards to pacing and tone. I like both ways! This way has quite an explosive ending (very effective) whereas the other ended with the tender moment. I think I like it a lot more this way, without the resolution, ending at the climax. All of the opening nature and dreamdrifting and the soft caress still makes it an extremely beautiful, romantic fantasy/memory. Really a lovely, sensual portrayal. Nicely penned.
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Thank you 😀I rearranged them several times before I was satisfied with the pattern. There are three versions now!
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Lovely ..it’s flowing sensational…😍😍😍
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